5A-Peter-VoiceIn

__**Day One:**__

__//**Original**//__

One Day I was riding my bike. A guy came up to me. He chased me to a dark alley. I got home and called the police. They caught the guy.

__//**Edited Version**//__

One, nice, sunny day, I was riding my brand new full suspension Mountain Bike. Then as I came to the park, a mysterious black suited stranger stood in front of me. The I was chased in to a dark, dim alley. Then I rode my bike and dashed out of the dark alley. And I got to my house and contacted the police. THey caught the mysterious black suited stranger. WHAT A DAY!